Gripping, thrilling and action packed

On their first day Hen could see smoke and was angry that someone had lit a fire in their forest. Hen spent the days reading books on a rug outside. One day she saw a ghost of Robert and he told her to go to the forest and see what the fire was. She said she would do it the next day. However that night she went in and she saw a witch. The next day The Witch’s cat came and led her to The Witch. Her real name was Moth. Dr Hardy (the evil doctor) wanted to put Hen’s mother in Helldon (a special hospital) and wanted to take Piglet to be looked after by Mrs Hardy.  Can Moth and Hen save her mother and Piglet?

I like the story because it is gripping, thrilling and action packed.  My favourite character is Henrietta (Hen) because she is determined and will never give up. She can’t be beaten by anyone.  I would recommend this story to adventurous boys and girls who are determined and never give in.